This is part II in a three-part series on how to format a personal statement or application essay.
- How to Format Your Personal Statement
- How Not to Format Your Personal Statement Part I
- How Not to Format Your Personal Statement Part II
Personal Statement Essay Structure
Many students fail to understand that there really should not be a structure or format to their personal statement essays. Students feel they should write an essay using the standard 5 paragraph format they use for their English papers or their SAT/ACT essays. They want to use an introduction that ends in a straightforward thesis statement, has 2-3 body paragraphs to back up the thesis, and then a conclusion. Other students believe they need to have the first paragraph set the scene for the reader…before they really get to writing. Still others feel they need to end the essay with a standard summary of their feelings or summary of their experiences.
As I’ve said before: Throw formatting out the window!
The best personal statement essays really have no structure at all. That’s what makes them more unique. That’s what makes them more memorable. These essays may use narrative or quotes. They may have a line or two in a paragraph and then a much longer paragraph that follows. They may have a one worded sentence just to emphasize a point or be more deliberate. In all cases, the best personal statements just do a really good job at SHOWING the reader instead of TELLING the reader who they are.
NOTE: This article is Part II of How to Format Your Personal Statement. You can follow this link to read Part I, “Personal Statement Essay Format.”
One of my students told me that another teacher advised beginning her personal statement essay with an introduction of herself. I’m assuming somewhere along the lines of, “I’m so and so.” I advised against this. Can I have your expert opinion please?
Thank you.
Karen Arcangelo
Hi Karen,
Yes I agree with you that it is not wise to start an essay with a simple introduction: “My name is Sally Jones and I am from Seattle Washington…”
However, if he/she wanted to be creative, she could use a narrative…as if he/she were walking into a doctor’s office/internship/club/activity and about to introduce him/herself on the first day…
This all depends, of course, on the prompt…Common App? Apply Texas? UC?